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  • Other Poetry Re: appraoching storm

    The storm has crept into my view I feel unsettled air The skies have darkened shades of blue; Winds take little care My earth does shake, my heart does race ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: untitled

    I'm tired of being compared to her. Her clothes are perfection, Her straight hair is pure gold, You watch as she passes. I watch from the side lines, I try ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alone

    Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun, like an assassin ... who does it for fun. Two deafening blows in a war that has just ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Racism

    By my dad: Racism is a difficult topic. You say something wrong And you may get dropped quick. Quick as in fast, falling to the ground, and hitting the pavement ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Final Performance of the Night

    Hey I just wrote this off the top of my head and I would like critiquers to help me with comma placement because I'm not very good at that, so ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Site Down For 12 Hours April 6, 2008

    I thought my internet was messing up. I could get on other sites, but not YWS. I was soo sad. I'm glad it's back up. :). -Rick.

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: going home

    a love lost, a love stolen, and the cost; a heart broken. a sliver of metal, his only way, to return to the love he lost that day, its frigid ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Everytime I look at You

    Ok. Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. PM me if you have any questions/concerns. As Riedawriter23 said, you need atleast two reviews before you can post your own work. Once you ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Scrapbook

    If I should grow old will I be just like you? Piecing families together with fairytale glue Make believe a Daddy for this storybook of mine, from photo album pages ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Nate's a fool!

    That was an interesting prank. XD. I swear I thought I was going insane when I saw that everyone was an Admin. I didn't think of it to be an ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The Serpent(warning this may hurt......)

    Why do you do this to me? Violating my space, running your slimy, scaly claws, up and down my spine. Chills over come me, Making me unable to move. Feeling ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love Is Blue

    EDIT: sorry about that, it's back now. Love Is Blue and-I-fell-in- with gasping breaths and crucifix arms thrown wide. Sodden clothes as magnets to a sea bed I'm just dying ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I hate your love

    Why can't you just, open your mind and see? See with those glazed eyes, that you're suffocating me? I wish you would, because you're messing with my head. I hate ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I say I hate you,

    I say I hate you, but that’s not right.. I know I need you in my life. I’m not desperate, I’m not sad.., More than anything I am mad. You ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: YWS Radio April 5th, 2008 Discussion

    I finally got it to work for me. XD. Took me forever to get it working. :P. Good show. -Rick.

    Apr 6, 2008


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace